You do have what qualifies as a catchy lead-in phrase, and your follow up is presented in the present tense; however, you fail to identify the subject of your photograph, and there is no additional information presented in the past tense.
Check out my comments/peer images and captions for concrete examples.
Evanisha,
ReplyDeleteYou do have what qualifies as a catchy lead-in phrase, and your follow up is presented in the present tense; however, you fail to identify the subject of your photograph, and there is no additional information presented in the past tense.
Check out my comments/peer images and captions for concrete examples.