Wednesday, December 14, 2011

what makes the raps good

I think that these raps are good because they speak on the biggest news stories of 2011, while expressing their own oppinons. I also enjoyed their creative ways of telling the details of the story while maintaining a good beat. for example, in one of the raps it saids
Open my copy of the New York Times-
Suddenly I am feelin’ like Busta Rhymes!
From Casey Anthony winning her case
to Charlie Sheen and his fall from grace.
Japan suffered a major quake
and the world reached out in its wake.
Unemployment rates continue to tower
and the 99 percent wants their rise to power.
As Libya liberates and Egypt riots,
America watches the Kardashian’s go on diets.
Winehouse goes ‘Back to Black’ one final time-
gas prices are still on their climb.
Osama bin Laden is found by the troops-
NBA players locked out of their hoops.
Will and Kate finally did wed-
Now it’s the time to put 2011 to bed.
in this rap he's retelling everything that happened in 2011, while maintaining the important details of the stories and keeping it entertaining.

1 comment:

  1. I think that this rap was very well written. She kept the rhyme fun and witty, which will draw many readers in while also maintaining to keep alot of important details from 2011 in.

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